Obi is always funny, cool and smart. Obi is cool because he does tricks with his tennis ball. He acts funny all the time because he puts his chew toy cow ears in the most obvious places ever. He's smart in his actions he sometimes waits under the table for someone to drop food on the ground so he can eat it. Obi is also a crazy dog, because he sometimes runs back and fourth all around the house.
Sometimes Obi is bad. Once Obi tore a huge hole in the carpet. He has even peed on the floor. He's chewed a hole in my blanket too. Sometimes at night he creeps into the dark dark kitchen and devours a stick of butter.
Sometimes Obi is bad. Once Obi tore a huge hole in the carpet. He has even peed on the floor. He's chewed a hole in my blanket too. Sometimes at night he creeps into the dark dark kitchen and devours a stick of butter.
I love your great use of new words!
ReplyDeleteOkay! Obi is 1. funny, 2. cool, 3. smart. You need sentences that are proof of these three thins you told me. You can use what you already have, but you must stick with the thesis you began with. That means: prove what you say by example. Obi is probably all those other things you say, too. But, you'd need a longer essay to write about all that stuff.